These pieces look the way that memories feel, so capturing that feels like a really solid accomplishment overall! From what I remember your concept being, I think this fits really well and I'm excited to see more
Your piece gives this youthful polaroid kinda of feel to the picture. It seems like something out of a indie film through its pop of colors and facial expression of people. Looks like an interpretation of memories through the eyes and being a young adult.
I love the nostalgic feel to these images. It feels like a glimpse into your world and your friendships. I love the habits one the most because of the strong composition and color, and I think the Gather piece has a really good start as well. It could be strengthened with some of the strong lines you use in the first one.
I love the habits one specifically (if I had to pick one). I also love how you are treating this assignment as a personal cycle/narrative.
ReplyDeleteI love what you are doing and the habits one is my favorite. I love the colors and the images you have included.
ReplyDeleteWow, agreeing with the comments here. I love the habits piece! The hard edge and change of filter comes through so well. Great color choices, too!
ReplyDeleteI think you are doing a good job so far, i like how it almost feels ghostly the way you are sort of transparent in the gather.
ReplyDeleteThese pieces look the way that memories feel, so capturing that feels like a really solid accomplishment overall! From what I remember your concept being, I think this fits really well and I'm excited to see more
ReplyDeleteThese all have really strong ideas and follows your words very well! I love how you layered your images and made it almost dreamlike
ReplyDeleteYour piece gives this youthful polaroid kinda of feel to the picture. It seems like something out of a indie film through its pop of colors and facial expression of people. Looks like an interpretation of memories through the eyes and being a young adult.
ReplyDeleteI love the nostalgic feel to these images. It feels like a glimpse into your world and your friendships. I love the habits one the most because of the strong composition and color, and I think the Gather piece has a really good start as well. It could be strengthened with some of the strong lines you use in the first one.
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